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Not Sure Who You Are

I知 not sure who you are
But I can feel you with the wind
I know your riding in that BMW
Heading my way

Not sure who you are
Not sure you値l even be worth it
Yet as I sit on this warm summer curb
With my sign in the air
I will wait for you

I knew I should run away
So I did
Just like I knew I should make this sign
So I did
And I know I should sit and wait for this feeling
So I do
The feeling is you
But I知 not sure who you are
Not sure what you look like

All I知 sure of is
You池e my long lost mother
And I can feel you on the wind
Not sure if you値l like me
But mom I知 your kid

The sign says it all
'Here I am'

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  • Oh wow. This was amazing. It's such a touching write. I love it from the beginning to the end and I couldn't pull myself away. Great write!


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    February 23
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    well penned


  • Thornz
    December 4, 2008

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    This is a touching piece. I love these lines; "And I know I should sit and wait for this feeling; So I do; The feeling is you". A wonderful read, thank you for sharing.