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Eighteen Words of Hate



Have you ever realized
that the world
would be far better off
if you would just fucking die?



Author notes

I don't think it gets plainer than that.

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  • heart shaped box
    January 11, 2009
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    very point blank.lol
    nice.


  • theredcatjazzoflove
    November 15, 2008
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    damn! this was a very mean thing to say lmao good luck to you in the contest


  • yourbentangel
    November 13, 2008

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    Happy Happy Joy Joy

    I can think of a couple people that I would love to say this to. I can actually think of a couple more that I have said this to!!! Sooooo glad we're on good terms right now!