Two bodies
e n i n
t w ed
r c h
a i n g
c l a s ping
t s t n
w i i g
Moving in synchrony
with the music of
moans and pants
Every movement
is in synch with the
orchestra of gasps
Moving with the same rhythm
as if it's a choreographed dance
In tuned
In perfect timing
Concluding
in harmony...
With bliss
With ecstasy
Author notes
Love making is an art- unknown
Lovemaking is a dance. it's a fusion of two bodies, moving in perfect synchrony as if there's music in the background that only these two people can hear...
Lovemaking is an art.
A contest entry
- Love making ... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended November 26, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Dance by dewfall.
950 points, ended March 8, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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yes..the bliss the the result and the joy as well..your scenario took me to the spot of your love..i love this piece..well done...
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thanks so much. i'm happy that you loved this one.
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I loved the poem almost melodic. Good luck in the contest
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thanks so much dear! i'm glad you liked it.
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