Return me to the days
When night and day made sense
When I would see you
And my eyes would widen with joy
Did anyone ever tell you, dear brother?
That you had the best smile
Which lighted up the room
Creating a powerful fire in my heart
This light, this fire
Keeps me sane at night
And holds me together during the day
This is in memory of you
Now carry me to my bed
When I can see your face again
Bring my soul to yours
When you enter my dreams
Float with me
On endless clouds
Returning to the days
When you held my hand
I feel you with me
You put a special part of my heart on reserve
I love you, night and day
My Dear brother
A contest entry
- Columbine Tribute Contest (Closes on 4/20/09) -- Lots of Options!!! --- Open to Prewrites by ZachP.
13800 points, ended May 24, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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WOW!!! AMAZING!!!!!! WOOT WOOT!
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great write
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Wow! I really like it. Great write! I saw the emotion in it.
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I love it! Nicely written and has a lot of love and emotion in it.
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This is such an amazingly sweet and sad poem, it is brillaintly written, I read it a number of times before I commented as I felt I had to
Keep writing this amazing stuff, it would be a shame to deprive this site of such talent
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very nice
This shows much love for a lost one. I can feel the emotions here. Great job, The Shaker -
I love it!!! way to go! but you may want to try and make the longer lines a tad shorter just to help with the flow of the poem. Just a suggestion of course. You don't have to. But i love the meaning in it!
Maggie
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