I think I’m starting to realize
What Romeo felt when he saw Juliet
You’re everything in my eyes
I’m going crazy, I can’t forget
The light in your eyes
Teaches the torches to burn bright
Oh to be a hand that might
Brush against your cheek
I think I’m starting to realize
How Romeo felt when he told Juliet
That thing’s may never work out
But it doesn’t make the love fade
My name dear love, means nothing
But the words I speak are everything
I’ll refuse my name all I need be hearing
Is that you’ll wear my wedding ring
Kiss my poisoned lips; I fear
No poison left to kill, my dear
I find you at my side, dagger within
This love was our sweetest sin
Author notes
option one.
LOVE <3
A contest entry
- Romeo and Juliet Contest by misshugglebugglez.
626 points, ended November 23, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do'ya think?
Comments
-
wow, that is amazingly good!!!! it was so sweet and beautiful! nice work! lets see... i loved the parts "Oh to be a hand that might
Brush against your cheek" and "Kiss my poisoned lips; I fear
No poison left to kill, my dear"
omg! i loved it! ur definitely gonna be on my finalist list. =)
peace out
hugs,
-adria/confuzzled angel <3
Adding your comment:
