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I Took My Chance and Blew It

In younger days
and leisured ways,
I took my chance and blew it.

I had energy to burn
with no concern,
I took my chance and blew it.

The sun, eternal timer
clocked me 100 miles an hour.
I didn't stop
I didn't think
I took my chance and blew it.

Now's your turn
to live and learn.
Now I’m leaving with my rot
but wish I had seized that shot
at life, love, fame, and fate.

So go and GO before its late.

Inside you early is time divine
there's plenty to do before YOU resign.

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  • Cannonsfire
    November 17, 2008

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    Could also apply to retirement...still need an active mind and body to enjoy it C

  • a n e s t h e s ia
    November 15, 2008

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    I love the direct style. . and great flow. I can really hear this. But hey, there's always another chance in life. Luck in the contest and all.