the one I call my sister
the one I call my brother
all my friends together
each with their significant other
their lives set on happiness
mine on unreal
I can't help but feel
that I'm a third wheel
single for over six months
I must be so dumb
hoping that they don't see
my heart going numb
hands to hold
hearts to love
while I get toyed
by Him above
wish I had someone
someone to call my own
just one other
so I'm no so alone
I miss the kisses
the hugs, the feel
of being special
but, that's out of the deal
like the old bear
set up on the shelf
all of us so close
yet no one to myself
emotions in a whirl
do I love him?
or am I just so alone
that I go out on any limb
just when I'm happy
when I'm begining to heal
I go out of my house
and get to be....
the third wheel
sorry that it isn't so great, working progress here!
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this is really good =]
some issues of flow and spelling errors in the lines i picked out but over all its really good definitely good for not having written in a while
"wish I had someone
someone to call my own
just one other
so I'm no so alone"
great job though keep it up =] and continue writing for sho =P -
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well duh its horrible, I know that
yeah, I haven't written in forever, sorry, I'm trying to again since I actually have time, thanks for the comment, you're the best!
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