Time stands alone in the field of ignorance
Her cries fall on soiled flowers;
Rendering a facade of where they last embraced
Sorrow is but a faded emotion
Dry are her intoxicated eyes; the last tear fell so long ago
All that remains is the ages to come
Watching over his eternal domicile;
Dreaming of what could have been
Author notes
Prompt:
http://sokolova-katarina.deviantart.com/art/My-Immortal-100601426
A contest entry
- Two Picture Prompts... by kiwigirljacks.
700 points, ended November 14, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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She does seem to be set in place there doesn't she! I could see her as watching over him eternally.. nicely done
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Great take on the picture
Best to you in the contest.
Much love
Ylova
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