Oh, Cupid, you've made a mistake
Your accuracy has gotten a bit sloppy
Need to practice a little bit more with your bow
You've hit the wrong people with your arrows
You play a game, an easy game
But please remember, you're playing with my heart
We're falling in love, me and him
While you laugh at the irony of my situation
Author notes
Option #4: write a poem about a forbidden or restricted love
A contest entry
- Romeo and Juliet Contest by misshugglebugglez.
626 points, ended November 23, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think?
Comments
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Hahaha. I liked this one. It was cute. Good luck in the contest
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oops i was listenin to music... so i called it a song instead of a poem... sorry
anyways, it was great
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woah, this is great!! nice job! "you play a game, an easy game but please remember, you're playing with my heart"... <-- my fave part of ur song
good luck! i enjoyed this piece! =)
hugglez!
-adria
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