Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Inspiration

What do you do when it is gone?
Lost?
Never to return?

Can you INSPIRE me?

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 16 of 16

  • John Faulkner
    January 25

    Edit | Reply
    What do I do ? I do not accept it..I will not be held down.I love myself too much.Tomorrow will be a better day..a new beginning..a new option..a time to reinvent myself..I will force a smile upon my face, suck up the anguish within my heart, and try it one more time..THis time, I will not fail, for I have faith within me..You need to stop feeling sorry..time to seek out the strength you have been awarded as a human being..PLease begin to use it..You need to be the one to graspon to it..Do you understand, my friend..Message me if you need..I will be here..You have my word..ok?...Smile


    John


  • Sle3p
    November 13, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    LOVE it <33


  • Ginger Woods
    November 12, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    It's a good poem actually, showing how your well striving for inspiration but you can't find any. Every writer feel's this at one point so they can relate, and we all know writer's usually want there reader's to relate so they have emotional connection.


  • GiftedPsychosis gold member
    November 12, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    It is amazing!
    And I really like this poem. Are you saying that I have bad taste?? :-D
    Haha I ♥ You :->

    • lemonhead
      November 12, 2008

      Edit | Reply
      Yes, if you like it But thank you anyways for lying <3


      • GiftedPsychosis gold member
        November 13, 2008
        Edit | Reply
        UGH!!
        I want to wiiiiinnnn!!!
        It ISSS great!!
        And you know it!
        I WIIIIIINNNN!!!!!


        • lemonhead
          November 13, 2008
          Edit | Reply
          Haha nice try, but you cannot win with one who always wins It is NOT great and I know its not.
          I win!

          • GiftedPsychosis gold member
            November 13, 2008
            Edit | Reply
            Fine. I'm not going to give you any stars for your comment.
            SUCK ON THAT!

            • lemonhead
              November 15, 2008
              Edit | Reply
              But it won't taste really great...

              • GiftedPsychosis gold member
                November 15, 2008
                Edit | Reply
                Are you suuure??
                :-DDD
                I heart you!!!

                • lemonhead
                  November 15, 2008
                  Edit | Reply
                  Haha I <3 you too!


                  • GiftedPsychosis gold member
                    November 15, 2008
                    Edit | Reply
                    IHEARTYOU IHEARTYOU IHEARTYOU!
                    <3's [[♥]] ALL AROUND [[♥]]!

                    [[P.S. -- iheartyou]]


                    • lemonhead
                      November 16, 2008
                      Edit | Reply
                      Hm... So.... I'm guessing you heart me?
                      or I hear thank you oh you
                      since you know I can't really tell because the absense of spaces


  • MaybeSoon
    November 12, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    "To be lost within the sea of the lost"

    In a poem this short, repeating words in the same sentence can be a bit tricky, in my personal opinion. It's just something that stood out to me when I read it.

    Other than that, I like how short it is; and I love the message, because as a writer I can relate to the feeling of seeing some new inspiration flutter right there in front of my eyes, only to disappear as soon as I try to grasp it =D

1 - 16 of 16