Inspiration
Its there... So close I reach to grab it
But then it recedes
It floats and flitters away
To be lost within the sea of the lost
Author notes
Yes... I know amazing... Lauren is back on AP... I know this so called 'poem' (Sad attempt if i may add) is quite... bad... but I need inspriration
Can you INSPIRE me?
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LOVE it <33
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Thanks
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It's a good poem actually, showing how your well striving for inspiration but you can't find any. Every writer feel's this at one point so they can relate, and we all know writer's usually want there reader's to relate so they have emotional connection.
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It is amazing!
And I really like this poem. Are you saying that I have bad taste?? :-D
Haha I ♥ You :->
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Yes, if you like it But thank you anyways for lying <3
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UGH!!
I want to wiiiiinnnn!!!
It ISSS great!!
And you know it!
I WIIIIIINNNN!!!!! -
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Haha nice try, but you cannot win with one who always wins
It is NOT great and I know its not.
I win! -
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Fine. I'm not going to give you any stars for your comment.
SUCK ON THAT! -
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But it won't taste really great...
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Are you suuure??
:-DDD
I heart you!!! -
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Haha I <3 you too!
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IHEARTYOU IHEARTYOU IHEARTYOU!
<3's [[♥]] ALL AROUND [[♥]]!
[[P.S. -- iheartyou]] -
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Hm... So.... I'm guessing you heart me?
or I hear thank you oh you
since you know I can't really tell because the absense of spaces
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"To be lost within the sea of the lost"
In a poem this short, repeating words in the same sentence can be a bit tricky, in my personal opinion. It's just something that stood out to me when I read it.
Other than that, I like how short it is; and I love the message, because as a writer I can relate to the feeling of seeing some new inspiration flutter right there in front of my eyes, only to disappear as soon as I try to grasp it =D
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Thank you I appreciate the comment.
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