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Behind the Fairy Godmother

“Gather here little friends. We’ve work to do.
Another beautiful maiden forsaken and cast off.
Weave her a lovely gown, Shining like a star,
Glowing like the moon, and Bright as the sun.”

“Now change my form,
Give me wings to fly to her side and
A wand to make her wish come true.
Join me please, in making a poor peasant girl
Achieve and attain her true destiny.”

Author notes

The image made me think of what Cinderella's fairy godmother might look like and how she helped Cinderella.

Image is: "Elodies Secret Stories" by sokolova-katarina
Link: http://sokolova-katarina.deviantart.com/art/Elodies-Secret-Stories-92539252

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 14, 2008
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    I can definitely see her as some kind of fairy there to offer dreams a chance to come true. Nicely done.