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I Saw That!

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I knew you were going to read this
saw it in a vision along with your skeptic expression,
for inside my mind’s probing crystal seer gaze,
an oracle telescopic sight resides,
piercing and probing within and without,
nothing can be cloaked from my stare.

Upon the observatory platform between my eyes,
worlds unfold in stunning precognition,
tomorrow is painted as a tapestry
unfurling in my dreams as the voice of ageless light.

Oh Chakra orb how you have exposed me to ultimate reality,
unto the opulence clothed in time’s veil,
seeing deeply into the chasms
residing behind another’s look.

Before my enlightened stare
truth will rise in the darkness,
past and present will expose their mysteries,
spirits will shine from their hiding places,
what roams invisible as residences of eternity
will be seen as clearly as the earth,
as all entities of the ethereal plain
stroll through the walls to share their wisdom.

Then before my glances you can find
the answers to questions stalking your brain,
be free to learn what exists on the planet as heaven’s grain,
discover the message of karmic song that comes in the rain,
accept, oh sagacity sight pilgrim
I’ll know your every thought’s disdain,
now trust your view to my omniscient aim,
um sorry, can’t recall your name.

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  • Dark Otter
    November 25, 2008
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    Pretty good!

    I like the finish, godlike powers and a bad memory. An excellent write, as always Penman


  • Draig aine gold member
    November 13, 2008
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    thumbs up

    oh yes


  • Ginger Woods
    November 12, 2008

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    Well this make's me feel young and iggnorant. I tried reading it but I suppose I'd need a dictionary. To put all of those large word's in a poem take's maturity, and it take's experience. So great work, I hope one day I can write just like that .