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Fairy dance

They flutter, escaping playful grasp
jumping from spot to spot
running from hands
and cages meant to bind.

All in play, she says-
as a means to bring them back,
but they simply giggle
and frolic away.

Pretty ballerina dressed in pink frowns,
determined that one day-
she too will dance amongst them.

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Credit artist: http://sokolova-katarina.deviantart.com/art/Elodies-Secret-Stories-92539252

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 14, 2008
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    And wouldn't it be lovely to dance among them
    Lovely write for the picture