You can say you like me,
but I can't believe what you say.
It's not that I don't trust you.
I've just had a bad day.
There you go on saying
That it hurts when I say
How I really feel inside... forgive me
I've just had a bad day.
If you felt like I do
You'd know what to say.
The words would come out easy,
And end my bad day.
So when you're ready baby,
Give me word and I'll say.
How to make it better
To end my bad day.
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Wow that can relate to problems I have had in the past, and thats sometimes how I feel. Great job!!!
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right on the money
I can certainly relate to this poem and it's no wonder that you're one of my favorites. The first stanza really made the point as it relates to me as I have a hard time trusting people. I've had bad days where nothing anyone says really cheers me up unless it's someone really close. Great!
~Willie~
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I didn't understand a thing.
But I like it!
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excellent.
"There you go on saying
That is hurts when I say
How I really feel inside... forgive me
I've just had a bad day."
I particularly like that....So true and real.
Very good job batty. =
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Wow luv, awesome write =)
maybe my hugs won't end your bad day, but I hope they at least help.
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awww, sad. i know exactly what you mean, though. it's always sad when people don't know the right thing to say to make you feel better.
i hope you feel better.
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