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Poetry's Irony Gates




My philosophy and philology
  circadianly remind me
    of the prudence
    and the necessity
      of silence.






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Often I am perplexed by a recurring insight: that no poem or prose ever fully embodies an experience. If I weren't so rapt by the manipulation of words, I might just have to spend the rest of my life in what Wordsworth called "a wise passiveness," or else altogether vow into a most poetic silence.

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    December 6, 2008

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    I think I live this poem on a daily basis. It is like my mind contents cannot be suited with words just toil there trying to equate some form of communication worthy and yet it does not come. Excellent job.

  • Just4u
    November 13, 2008

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    So true, sometimes to move ahead we need to just shut up and listen,
    for the answer is always there, even if we are unaware of it at the time
    because we are trying to hard to find it...

    Peace within the chaos
    Calmness in the fight
    Flaps both up and down
    will bring the bird to flight

    Teardrops through the laughter
    rainbow after storm
    Death meets through the living
    the second we are born

    Have a lovely week...

    Eddy