and yet the beauty remains unbroken
within the pale petals
of time -
the acts
upon poisonous temptations
shrivels her tongue,
as her bare body waits
second after second;
hair frames face:
gags lips with golden threads
to taste light, and
silenced sweetly
at a virgin neck.
vines lay with her breast -
suppression is seclusion and
that is peace...
her voice wishes to be unspoken
until one day,
the pollen blooms
before the sun falls
apart.
~~~
Author notes
written during, heaven forbid, pre-calculus.
In a list
A contest entry
- & all I ask, is for your best-- by Kiss the girl--x.
700 points, ended December 6, 2008, 45 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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'her voice wishes to be unspoken
until one day,
the pollen blooms
before the sun falls
apart.'
those lines are amazing, this whole piece is amazing
thanks for entering
♥
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I adore the imagery! It's so beautiful!
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lol You should do pre-calculus more often then
This is softly beautiful and sensuous to read but I would get rid of the ellipsis because the images in these make the reader pause and sigh anyway C
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XD You should spend more time in Pre Cal. This is pretty! I love how increidbly descriptive this is!
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awww, wow, this amazing cassie
you are amazing
good luck ♥
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