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My Little Eskimo

Fur to keep warm,
as pale as the moon.
Eskimo kisses all we have,
paws wrapped around you,
hold on to me my little Eskimo.

The sun melts us,
like an fire to chocolate .
Our home disappearing,
as if all a dazing dream.
hold on to me my little Eskimo.

Food disappearing,
an evil magic trick.
Stomachs gurgling,
making music with the empty.
Bodies once strong now weak,
time is ticking away,
soon the stopwatch will stop.
Hold on to me my little Eskimo,
hold on.

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  • Dragon Of Darkness
    December 10, 2008
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    wow wonderfull work


  • spiritualangel
    December 3, 2008
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    Beautiful. Well done. Best of Luck.


  • maralisa silver member
    November 16, 2008

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    aw a brilliant take on the promt your imagery is so powerfully true that all our creatures are becoming exticnt because the ice caps is melting fast we must try ad eradicate these problems good luck in the contest maralisa


  • Broken Vow
    November 15, 2008
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    haha. this makes me think of you and your eskimo bf. haha. i like this. great job!


  • TOEchikira
    November 12, 2008
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    aww!! eskimos!!! i love this its adorable. <3

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