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Crystal Candlestick




Crystal candlestick
on top of my birthday cake.
Who forgot candles?


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"kurgle"

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  • -LilacThOughts- gold member
    October 30

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    Hood-Wink!

    Very amusing, this made me chuckle at the very thought, but at least the candlestick was crystal, worth a bob or two lol...

    Light hearted and uplifting, never stop penning and thank you for sharing this smiling haiku with us all, and congrats on the trophy...

    Ambushed by a Bandit!

    Love and smiles...
    ~Lilac~


  • Freak-in-BlackJeans
    December 16, 2008
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    How funny! XD


  • Harrisham Minhas
    December 6, 2008

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    This is cute.




  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    November 30, 2008

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    He Haw!

    This is so funny & clever! What would anyone expect of you though? I can see this is my mind's eye & almost hear the conversation! All the best in the Contest!


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    November 14, 2008

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    so who would do such a thing...lol...crystal candlesticks and forgot the candles...what an image..thanks my brother for the smile


  • Polaja Greeters member
    November 13, 2008

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    This is a beautiful poem - I really like the humour and the image of a crystal candlestick (in my mind) is hilarious it reminds me a little of Lumiere! Good luck in the contest

    Keep writing

    Polly


  • ShelleyA gold member
    November 13, 2008

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    A very good write and presentation. Cleverly written senryu. Skillfully crafted. Well penned
    and much enjoyed. Best wishes in the contest.

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