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Here It Is [[Mikey]]. Just Read It.

Dreams are just the reality, your too scared to see,
and believe it when I tell you,
your in all my dreams,
call me stupid,
'cause I deserve it,
I thought it was destiny,
we were a meant to be,
but a never going to be,
i'm so afraid of losing you,
but you aren't even mine,
I miss you and I think about you,
only all the time,
Im begging you to love me, like the way you did,
remember we had our whole lives planned?
What about our kids?
I fell in love with you,
it wasnt just a tumble,
she makes you fall to the ends of the universe,
and I cant even make you stumble,
If I told you how much you hurt me,
and of all the pain,
you never would have the courage,
to see my face again,
I'm accepting that you dont want me,
and that I have to set you free,
but one day you'll look back and say,
"Damn that girl really did LOVE me."

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Its for you Michael So Dont ask. iLy. and idc if you dont care.

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  • MisguidedGhost
    November 14, 2008

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    I care about you alot.....I love you with all my heart but I just can't be with you because I'm in love with her...give me time and maybe ill come around...


    • BeautifulEyesore.
      November 14, 2008
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      I knew it...thats great.....have her..I cant wait anymore...its tearing me apart and killing me...
      Ive been in lvoe with you from the start...dont play games with me..

  • MisguidedGhost
    November 14, 2008
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    I do care.


  • CherokeeSiren
    November 12, 2008

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    It's a great write but it sounded kinda like a letter you were writting to someone. Don't get me wrong it was really good. keep up the good work.


  • Tyl3r
    November 12, 2008

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    You may stumble
    You may fall
    But I 'll still love you
    After all

    This is from one of my poems. I hope that it's a good analogy.


  • SoldiersRain
    November 12, 2008

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    Wow..This is a great piece. I hear so much anguish concealed behind walls of glass here, it really is beautifully depressing. Great job on this piece and I hope your love is returned. I too know how this feels. Great job once again.

    Tod.


    • BeautifulEyesore.
      November 12, 2008
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      Todders! Thanks so much dear, it means a lot.
      I hope the love is returned too...
      thanks again

      Sav

  • imoutyo
    November 12, 2008

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    this is eloquent because it is so direct and full of feeling. love can be real and strong, even when it is not returned.

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