We are both parallel lines
On an endless plane
Stretching to all points
In the space between
Every perpendicular line
That forms the sum
Of that distance
In a huge dilation
Which shows the proofs
In the heart of that midpoint
Is the area of me and you
How was it?
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Well, I guess betwen those essential dimensions, there would not have been life, wise work, this.
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I like this poem, well constructed. Personally, I would change the word "forms" to "spans".
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Wow, I really, really like this. The metaphors and imagery is perfect.
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aww this is sooo cute. (omgosh! u connected math with love? they dont even go well together. but you made it possible ) and this poem was well crafted. keep penning
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I really like this, it's a very creative and cute write.
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I really like this. It shows great thought and it also demonstrates feelings in a different way from the norm. It seems almost technical, but at the same time it is so simple in its statement. Really well done.
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That's awesome
That's an awesome poem, thanks for reviewing my poem . I think I'll take your suggestion , it's a good one
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A great idea well conceived & written.
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aww that's so cute!!
very clever title and creative use of math/geo vocab!! =P
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:)
This was delightful and cute. I'm sure if you showed it to your geometry/math teacher, he/she would really like it.
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