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Lamplighter

You are the light of the world,
leading the way in the dark.
A precious refined pearl,
you leave a loving mark.
Your word is a a lamp,
under my feet as I move on.
Going with us to the enemie's camp,
illuminating light like through the dawn.
All things are led by you,
you can open our eyes to see.
The path is narrow to pursue,
nothing is secure than a walk with thee.
Making the way bright,
I shall not fear.
You give us vision and insight,
we are not in darkness alone, you are near.

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  • Fire-Fly
    April 13

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    Very good poem which I enjoyed reading very much.

    Thanks for entering and good luck in my contest.


  • Kathraina gold member
    February 2
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    Judged-ola!

    marvelous write, i love this


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    December 10, 2008
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    I recognize many of your Bible quotes. It is a light to ny rodway.


  • penman gold member
    December 5, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and so well done. thank you for sharing.

  • michaeline
    December 4, 2008

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    I think this is good just as it reads now.You were easy to follow and understand and so many people can relate to it,including myself.The title that you chose was a good one and the words seemed to flow never ending.I might would work on the backround though but like I said I like it the way it is.


  • Rovingone gold member
    November 29, 2008

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    There is such truth here. And, beautifully expressed, meaningful witness. I feel the same way. He always lights the way and clears the path of all obstacles if we turn to him first.


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    November 12, 2008

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    is there any other way to remove fear then putting our faith and trust in God.

    You give us vision and insight,
    we are not in darkness alone, you are near.
    such a wonderful lovely pleasure to read
    God bless you my friend.

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