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I'll always be here for you 12.11.08

I’ll always be here for you 12.11.08

Never worry my brother,
As I will never leave you,
I feel so sad to see you confused and blue,
As I watch you looking around,
We both know times can be hard,
Though I will always be here for you,
When I look into your eyes,
I see your hurt… your feelings of doubt,
Please don’t despair,
As we are a pair,
You can always rely on me,
I promise you I will never flee,
So as I hold you tight my wee brother,
Know I will help guide you through your life,
You will never be alone,
I will always be by your side,
Always no matter what, I will always guide,
Brother’s stick together,
And we will forever,
As long as we have each other,
Don’t let anything else give you a bother.

Namaste Selfexpressive.

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  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    November 12, 2008
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    Simply beautiful! There's nothing like the love
    of an older sibling to help watch over and guide
    you throughout your younger years. Lovely work here and thanks a lot for entering this piece into my contest! I appreciate it and wish you the best
    of luck with it here!




    Jeremy0826


    • Selfexpressive
      November 13, 2008
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      Thank you..

      Thank you for your kind comments... I truly apprecitate them,

      Selfexpressive aka Karen.

  • Bob Fox silver member
    November 12, 2008
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    Brothers

    A mothers gift for each and every brother. And the hope and love of all. Poets especially.


    • Selfexpressive
      November 13, 2008

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      Thank you Bob...

      Thanks my friend for commenting on my poem, I truly appreciate it...

      Selfexpressive aka Karen xx