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The liar




He told lies
She saw through his clear blue eyes
Certainty turned into doubt
she found out it's a disguise

The deceit
Finally almost complete
Was written clear on his face
Out of place he was a cheat

He's undone
She knew about all his fun
Both of his women then turned
He was spurned now has to run

Over now
He's gone with a final bow
Memory leaves a bad taste
He's replaced that's her new vow


Author notes

Rannaicheacht Ghairid (ron-a'yach cha'r-rid):
A quatrain stanza with uneven lines. The first line has three syllables, the other three have seven. The stanza rhymes a a b a, with a cross-rhyme between three and four.


A x a
x x x x x x a
x x x x x x b
x x x x x x A

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  • Amera gold member
    November 15, 2008

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    LOL, I can't believe it! I gave you a Rannaicheacht Ghairid as a challenge and you did it! Not bad; not bad at all!

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    Amera