You don't want to dive into my mind
You'll find it a dangerous place to be
People tell me I'm too dark
A little annoying
Insane
Eccentric
I spend a little too much time
Being a little too weird
Until this day I believed them
Until this day I thought I had to change
Just to please the ones who were broken
Molded into shape
Until they couldn't think straight
Until this day I cared what they thought
So please accept me as I am
Because I do
Author notes
Prompt - http://rashell.deviantart.com/art/madness-70795302
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt: MADNESS! by Asylaarix.
525 points, ended January 29, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This piece has great sentiment. The two main paragraphs could have been of similiar shape and of the same number of lines. However this is only a little thing as the picture you paint is so great.
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wow, wow, wow
I really like it! I can completly relate to the feeling of one day saying ''who cares what anyone thinks, im me and thats that.''
I wrote a couple poems like this one too...
Good job! I really like it! -
i like it...quite a bit actually. i feel the same way, so good job and keep writing!
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I can really relate to your poem. I like the imagery you paint in your words
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Humm..very intimate touches you interlaced witht the trtuth of your heart and made this poetry a soft presention of your hard emotions behind the truths...
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