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Starving Artist Looking Across a College Classroom

I play the pen.

I can make you
feel my sorrow
in three words or less-

can bring you to your knees,

can reach down your throat and
steal your very breath.

But I cannot make you love me.

Please tell me what you think

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  • azlyn gold member
    November 12, 2008

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    This is so wonderful...the title drew me in and the poem makes a very powerful statement.


    Az


    • NiurTarow
      November 12, 2008
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      Thanks Az. I wasn't feeling the greatest in class today. But I'm better now.