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Bear neccesity

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There's nothing like,
a tender hug,
to warm the heart,
with cleansing love,
so when the day,
has passed away,
words seem lost,
from  your dismay,
give a friend a gentle,

touch because a hug,

makes every-ones day.

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user name maralisa please credit google images artist unknown
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  • spiritualangel
    December 3, 2008
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    Beautiful. Well done. Best of Luck.


  • DolceVito gold member
    November 16, 2008
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    So sweet

    Excellent write, super cool take on the prompt"why couldn't I think of that?"


  • Beauty Of Silence
    November 16, 2008

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    AWW!

    this is beautiful. i love the background... its so cute and the picture's brilliant as well. this is so true, a hug definitely makes everyone's day keep penning


  • Venugopal gold member
    November 13, 2008
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    very sweet poem for today's morning. you are sweet, what you speak also very sweet dear child


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    November 13, 2008

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    Aw hun this is so sweet
    Love the flow and your kindness of heart that spills in this loving write
    Best wishes and hope you do well in this contest
    Julie xx

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