You give yourself without a fight
To the black goddess of the night
Her teeth are sharp, her fangs are bared
Your blood with her will soon be shared
She promises forever, immortality
But that's not the truth of this reality
Instead she leaves you lying there
In her dark, forbidden lair
You were dinner, nothing more
To this vampire of evil lore
Long live the queen and her evil reign
Who promises so much, but gives only pain
A contest entry
- Ghosts, Witchs, and Wolves Oh MY!!!!!! by Falcon SilverWolf.
450 points, ended December 18, 2008, 12 entries
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Comments
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Tis a spooky but wonderful poem. Quite a wonderful read. The words flow together nicley. wonderful write. Keep Writing.
~Kathryn~
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wow
this poem is so powerful.. its so dark..i love it.. i cant wait to read more of your poems.. -
Ah, this was beautiful. I felt the sadness, and end come from this write. I enjoyed it. You did well.
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In the second stansa shouldn't it be "she leaves". I really liked this poem, I love reading about vampires. Great work.
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