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Treat


Secretly yours and primeval beat,
Our virgin bodies are preceding production.
Skins generating indispensable heat,
An artistic cadence of vital seduction. 
Touch, smell, and kiss- my soul is complete.
Feel the lines and curves as an introduction
An open valley, come, no need to be discreet.
I want everyone to know the suction
Your kisses derives of my mind, let us replete
The endless strokes, which broke an artist’s construction
Of painting you smoothly and slowly, your love’s a treat.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 15, 2008

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    Ah..the endless strokess..what a sketch you have shared..beautiful indee..well done..and thanks for sharing such a piece..


  • RareFlower
    November 15, 2008
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    Lovely poem. Good luck in the contest