Your storm clouds
Exploded into my blue skies
I was fine
But now I'm drowning
Your thunder and lightning
Came to ruin my day
I was on my way
But now I can't move forward
The rain eventually
Passed away
But for now I stay
And drown her in this puddle
A contest entry
- where blue skies meet rain clouds by going nowhere.
1400 points, ended November 13, 2008, 9 entries
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Comments
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The imagery in this is wonderful. 'Your storm clouds/exploded into my blue skies'
This manages to tie in very nicely to my prompt. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck! -
following along quite nicely until the last line. Did you mean to drown her in a puddle or could it be you meant drowning here in this puddle? thank you for entering
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amazing how a cloudy day can get us down... but the blue skies are what we need to look at, which we would not appreciate without that rainy day. thank you
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