My hand in your hand
We walk on the shore
We talk of our future
and what we've planned
I won't write our name
in this beach sand
For the tide will roll in
and wipe it away
If I were to write them
in the deep blue skies
it would go with the wind
but I will write my name
upon your gentle heart
and yours, engraved deep
inside mine, eternally
For together we stand
This day, our love, our vows
I promise to never forsake thee
as our names are etched in love
reminding us of our devotion
A contest entry
- PIF QUICKIE-PROMPT POSTED! by Jeremy0826.
1200 points, ended November 13, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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So beautiful and romantic!
I love the feeling and sincerity
in your words here. Wonderful
work and thanks so much for
taking the to enter my contest!
Good luck to you!
Jeremy0826
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