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Raise your glass.

I feel inclined to raise my glass,
Raise it to the irony
Of always saying I'd never find that perfect boy.

I smile to the fact
I should have spoken the words,
That you wanted to say too.
I want you to know
I always wanted to say them,
But never found a way to express them properly.
I recall,
When I was too shy to speak to you first
And I thank God you had the courage.
Thinking back to our first phone call,
Always wanting to hear your voice
But never knowing what to say.

So, I feel inclined to raise my glass,
Raise it to the irony
Of thinking I'd never be with my perfect girl.

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  • splinteroflight.
    November 13, 2008
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    Baby!

    This is amazing, I feel inclined to worship you for this!
    It's so meaningful&beautiful
    [&Every other 'ful' in the whole wide world!]
    The repetition at the end just completes it,
    I agree with Lex, there's something about it that just flows perfectly!
    lovesss,
    xxxxxxxxxxx


  • alexandra.
    November 12, 2008
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    Miss Emily Walker!
    you know what.
    It's more better than the last, and if possible more meaningful.

    I bleeding love it .
    There's something about it, that just flows...
    I'm screwed if I actually know what that it is.
    But it's there. I'm just pretty blind.
    It has got the IT.


    loveyou.
    xx