Divine union
Shakti and Shiva divine pressence bless our union
I worship at your sacred alter
Through tender touch let all fear fall away like autumn leaves
Let me approach you with a heart filled with Love as Beloved and Divine
Silken sheets caress our nakedness
Perfumes sweet take us to celestial heights of pleasure
Our lovemaking resounds like sacred music as positions change effortlessly to the next in perfect harmony
Sweet and gentle climax as bodies shudder together
Whispering moans of excitation
Resting in perfect adoration of the Beloved and Divine
You are my Shakti
I am your Shiva.
A contest entry
- Love making ... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended November 26, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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As always, this is a great piece!
I love this line:
You are my Shakti
I am your Shiva.


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beautiful vivid imagery in this piece. I wish you all the best in the contest.


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Humm..wonderful and very eternal philosophy is discussed while revealing the secret of the love making..thank you so much for such a depth..well done...
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A beautiul entry, producing wonderful images
Good luck
~sugar~


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it must be wonderful silken sheetscaressing lovers nakedness and at the momment of climax thebodies shuddering togrther


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And
the poet in Dr. Zhivago sighs. For such words of love are divine.

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