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Jelly Fish

You dance
You flow and ebb
Your tentacles twirl
They tickle the surface

But through your shell,
Perfectly delicate
How you sting

Enticing un-movement
Led me into your grasp
And the gentle hug
That you enveloped me in
How it stung in the end

Unrelenting you stung,
Without knowledge of my pain
The waves keep you untouched
Pristine
As I writhe
And you dance

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