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Chain Reaction

Teach your children while they’re young
about the power that love holds.
It’s a melody, that once sung,
will fill their lives as it unfolds.

The comfort of a mother’s hug,
the strength found in a brothers hand,
is more powerful than any drug
and once set loose, it will expand.

A touch of love that warms the heart
engenders courage to reach out
and pass the warmth, which will impart,
that feeling on to those without.

How can one person change the world?
We often give up before we try
and as we lay, fetally curled,
we fail to hear our heart’s reply.

Reach out and from that tiny seed,
by touch, by word, by each kind action,
we can fill the void of those in need;
a loving chain-reaction.


Author notes

A bit mundane but cute pictures do that to me
Prompt: Picture
Picture Credit: C-Friendship (www.googleimages.com)
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  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    November 12, 2008

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    This is so wonderful!
    Thank you for your entry here and for
    posting the proper credit for this picture.
    I appreciate your entry and good luck
    to you in my contest!




    Jeremy0826


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    November 12, 2008

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    I don't think its mundane.. but hey Im the odd ball remember.?? I really love this poem that you've written .. excellent take on the prompt. that pic is just too cute.. I think its perfect.

    good luck