It takes intense desire
finesse to heat the fire
one must work in entire
add words to help inspire.
Soft words that melt the heart
each one must play their part
be sure the fire to oft restart
this is lovemaking as an art.
The dividends will pay fair
two souls with much to share
love distinguished by fine care
nothing between, two souls bare.
Eye contact to be included, too
attention to details and avenues
give all you have, pay your dues
you're the 'star': now your reviews.
Author notes
Love making is an art...Unknown.
This quote is a prompt.
In a list
A contest entry
- Love making ... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended November 26, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Feel Free...
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so much sharing ..emotions are very obvious with this poetry reaching into the hearts of the readers as wqell..thank you so much for this piece..
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Excellent
This was wonderful. So passionate and descriptive. Best of luck in the contest.
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Yes..so true and so much viewd from the soul of the poet..this is very heart warmaing piece..I love it..well done my friend...
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I love the rhymes! This is just beautiful. Good luck in the contest
Much love
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Thanks Ylova...I'm hardly an expert(smile)but I just put my 'two' cents in with the others hahaha lol
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this is a great piece.
love your rhyme.
good work!
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Thank you, such a challenging topic hahaha especially since I'm single
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Great rhythem, very good and elaborate.
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I really don't know, Z, why I wrote for this one, as I am currently single hahahaha but, I love a challenge-sometimes lol
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Loved your poem. Good luck in the contest
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Thanks so much for your review lol
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