A hug was what I needed
I sat their looking glum
So when you walked right past me
Your smile told me come
I did'nt get up
I just looked at you
With my big sad eyes
And that was when you knew
You knew what I wanted
To see me you came
And then put your hands around me
And all of a sudden
I didn't feal lame
I just smiled
A contest entry
- 30-60 words Contest PIF Quickie..Picture Prompt ..58th Contest by Spiritualangel by spiritualangel.
660 points, ended December 3, 2008, 13 entries
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Comments
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Beautiful. Well done. Best of Luck.
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a brilliant take onthe promt your emotions are brilliantly beautiful we all need a hug sometimes to make an hard day complete good luck inthe contest
marailsa
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Many of us go thru this feeling at one time or the other in our lives, we feel we find that consolation, peace and love in those certain people and how they look and feel us, as if they know what they want, and they DO fel what we want. I like how you captured this! Beautiful!
Love and light,
Lencio
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:0 !!!WOW!!! this one is one of my favorites!!!
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