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Wings

Purple and Green
Wings that carry
The owner of them
Over the trees

Wings red and black
Carry their owner
Over feilds
Of blooming flowers

Wings grey and black
Carry rain and snow
Over lands
Dotted with towns

Wings that float
Over the blue sky
Wings that bring
Snow, Hail, and Rain

Wings of clouds
Wings of the sun
Wings of animals
Birds, butterflies, and moth's

Wings that I own
When I am flying
Through books
Or flying through the clouds

Wings that I own
When I am sitting
In my chair
Or laying in my bed

Wings that lift me up

Author notes

Just sat down and wrote it.

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  • SeptemberFaith
    December 15, 2008

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    I think this is a very well written piece. and though you speak of wings and butterflies, it doesnt really go with the butterfly effect theme... (my opinion).

    I still think it was a lovely poem,
    Criss