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EveryDay of my Life

Everyday of my life i deal with the pain
everyday, everyday
I can't stop thinking about you

Everyday of my life is just another meaningless
day until your back with
me where you belong

Everyday of my life i wish that you would
come back somehow
but you can't, never will be able to

Everyday of my life i cry
cry for reasons nobody understands
nobody ever will

Everyday of my Life i will wait.


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i plan to revise this poem

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  • Ryan79
    November 12, 2008

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    It is really great. I felt the emotions in my soul. I like how deep it is. The feelings are wonderful. Is this about someone that you know?

  • XxLoverOfDarknessxX
    November 12, 2008

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    wow devil, this was a phenomenal poem. i absolutely loved it and it took my breath away. the emotion is very nice and this was one of your best yet. keep up the good work!