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Conflicted

You have me conflicted
I am hot and I am cold
My wisdom has been crossed
I am young and I am old
My heart is burning for you
But I'm frozen with your acts
I am going on my beliefs
I am ignoring all the facts
My soul , it's telling me to go
But my heart loves too much
I am standing on my own
But my love life holds a crutch
I am balanced in this moment
You are my crush from head to heel
We together but apart
You do not understand just how I feel

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  • blackchapter
    November 12, 2008

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    Beautiful write! Each line has a mirror conflict which works so well with your chosen prompt!
    Definitely will read more of your work1
    good luck for the contest