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Sitting in the Sun


It seems I am protected
My umbrella keeps me still
The rain is all around me
The thunder keeps me real
Puddles are around me
The rain, it splashes in
I am drifting from the world
I can see no sin
The clouds are darkening
But I know there is a sun
I am smiling on this bench
May the rain never be done
I am in love with this feeling
Because there is no disdain
I am in love with this weather
I love just sitting n this rain

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  • dustytiger
    November 19, 2008

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    what an uplifting take on the prompt! i love what you wrote here, it's so pretty, i can close my eyes and picture happily sitting in the rain on a warm day, best of luck in the contest


  • Sandygram
    November 18, 2008

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    A wonderful take on the picture. I t made me smile. Very uplifting. Thank you for entering and best of luck in my contest. Take care, Sandy


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    November 12, 2008
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    Sweet Thoughts

    To just enjoy the rain and be out in the eliments

    great flow great write

    Blessings

    Rend