Sickness swells and casts its spells,
Immersed in deeply coated wells;
It's killing all as it excels,
And I'm the one in which it dwells.
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Oooo, deliciously dark and a litle twisted. Great rhyming here as well. Splendid flow. Gripping thoughts...


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I like the imagery that you've used in this poem. It's very descriptive.



