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Death Follows

Sickness swells and casts its spells,
Immersed in deeply coated wells;
It's killing all as it excels,
And I'm the one in which it dwells.

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  • Sokarjo
    June 14

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    Oooo, deliciously dark and a litle twisted. Great rhyming here as well. Splendid flow. Gripping thoughts...


  • Learning2PaintYou
    November 12, 2008
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    I like the imagery that you've used in this poem. It's very descriptive.