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wacko thoughts

peter made me think about cemetary-do
they always have food/drinks in memory of...
royal pisser
if and when I want at least to  enjoy the refreshments
no need to watch calories then
not that I watch them now...just very little appetite

thus: glutton-michi on the move
at her own funeral party.........

hope the neighbours in the graveyard  are pleasant
eternity is so bloody long
what if they are terribly dry and boring
or stuck-up.............
ichs
even there won't be good enough
to blend in

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  • Laughing at you
    September 8

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    oh dear oh dear..here is poor old me living a nightmare they call M.S, and what have i too expect...haha it's just aswell try to stay constantly stoned lol
    a nice poem i think you have smoked the holy...haha keep chillin, keep groovin.keep cool.........eric


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    August 26

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    you write quite eerily and ghostly somedays michi...as though your life is a dream.,,i enjoyed reading this,,,,whos ,,peter? hug....pete


    • michichoeret
      August 27
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      peter?

      have only one peter in my empty head. someone who makes me smile and sometimes blush. whatever his real name

      and living a dream? aren't we all?


  • awannabepoet
    June 29

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    If they are stuck up and boring, in that form you will have no restrictions of earth and gravity to overcome... fruck them all just get up and kick them in the sides and say ....

    Yo, shut the bloody hell up and laugh will you!
    Oh you do no wish to laugh, now do you!
    Well here is something just for you
    Whammo, Kazzoom, Mushroom Clouds
    Stars and the world is turning anew
    A fresh unfleshed knuckle sandwhich
    for all the times I was stuck and could
    not dispense my ungodly retribution.

    There you have it, a little gift from me to you, do enjoy...


  • DeadandHeartless
    January 21
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    lol I love this one It made me laugh!


  • cre8tiv-writer
    November 14, 2008
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    U have an interesting view of death and all that it entails.....I really like your style!


  • Simply Olivia
    November 12, 2008
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    This is poignant, with a bit of humor

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