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All I need is a Chance

I catch you're eye as you walk by
you smile and I know I'll hold on for a while
It's the little moments that make my days
and the little things you do that make me fall in love with you in so many ways.
But when I see you with her it breaks my fragil heart
the way you look at her tears me apart

If you only knew
that I could be your perfect girl
if you just give me a chance
If you would just gave me one dance
I might be able to make you see
that I could be as right for you as you are for me

We talk about silly things
and try to deal with what life brings
It feels like we are growing closer i think
when I see you I smile and you wink
We're becoming pretty good friends
and I hope that never ends

but I wish you knew
that I could be your perfect girl
if you just give me a chance
If you would just gave me one dance
I might be able to make you see
that I could be as right for you as you are for me

Yes honey I could be your perfect girl
just give me a chance
Please give me a chance
All I need is a Chance

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 25, 2008

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    this was good my friend, sometimes that is all it takes a chance for something to grow, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest