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again

I can’t stop tripping backwards.

Every time a set of hands slows my fall,
my back breaks on the ground, again.


again, again
a fucking gain.

When did repetition turn into
an improvement?

Author notes

srsly, fuckmylife.

Every hand that has tried to reach out now has a finger missing from where I've chomped down. What is wrong with my mind?

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  • afzal shauq
    February 28
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    good poem

    well done... it's a good poem indeed with rich idea and done well in poetic way


  • Fireworks
    November 13, 2008
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    Nothing is wrong with your mind... it happens to everyone at some point in their life.


  • WtfPancake
    November 12, 2008
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    I tend to like everything you write


    my texting ran out btw..
    ghey

  • ZachofDoom
    November 12, 2008
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    oye, chika; por tu, soy aqui. todos los dias.

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