My heart;
wasn't left in a place of this world,
though this world is beautiful in all its creation.
I've left my heart;
within hearts I've left behind,
tearing at mine everyday.
As long as I'm viewed with hatred;
I will bear their pain.
Praying to God:
I ask they be granted,
wisdom and understanding,
opening their hearts.
So I may be loved by them;
once again.
A contest entry
- I Left My Heart In ________ by poet2angels.
700 points, ended November 23, 2008, 20 entries
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tearing at mine everyday. -
ah i think we all do this each day, but that is fine, we live and learn. and people can run at us and attack or they can casually stroll in and say hello, i get both all the time, i smile at the attackers though sometimes i lose my temper and snarl, and i smile at the ones that stroll who i never lose my temper with
people love me and hate me inthis site, i was going to say in equal measure, but the ones that like me far outweigh the ones that do not, it shows in the statitiscs i have with on block and who has me on favs 55 to 420
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It's a good thing our judgment day will not be decided on those who have loved us or hated us, but on how we loved others and kept the law of love.
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what are your thoughts on mormons? i am interested, not that i am a mormon but i know and like many who are.
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Your words hold an abundance of imagery. I really like how you started this piece and the ending was very powerful. Thanks for sharing.
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Beautiful and humble ...
You took thisa in a different direction...A wonderful place...
TY for entering this lovely spiritual piece
Lynda
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