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Together For Eternity

Once upon a midnight dream,
in the land of the fairy,
there lived a lonely princess
who waited her turn to marry.

She thought it was hopeless,
she was one of a kind,
a handsome fairy prince
she hoped she would find.

She wanted to marry
in the castle on high,
where her and her prince
would be together to fly.

She finally found the one
that took her by the hand,
they chose to fly 
to a faraway land.

He took her to the castle
where they would wed,
to be together even after death,
they chose this instead.

Close to a higher power
to make their love right,
she wanted to be married
within the fairy light.

Their love was as true
as the stars at night,
their wedding would be
a most wonderful sight.

They married in the castle
dressed in fairy white,
with the stars in the sky
they prepared to take flight.

Hand in hand together at last
the way that it should be,
as they fly beyond the clouds
they're together for eternity.

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17. My castle in the sky

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  • blackchapter
    November 12, 2008
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    I like the fairy tale weaved from your chosen topic, though I think that you can work on the rhythm of each stanza. It has good flow at times, but every now and again the syllable count is too high or too low and it takes away from the feel of the poem.
    Thanks for entering my contest and good luck!!