With broken wings
I sit and cry.
Inside my prison
I wonder why.
Why is life
so hard at times?
Why am I being punished
for my unintentional crimes?
Love is not supposed
to hurt like this.
In my life
It's you I miss.
Some may tell me
I have it all.
Loving son and caring friends
So why do I feel the need to crawl?
Crawl to you
on hands and knees.
Asking could you
love me please?
All I ask from
this life of mine.
Is a lot of your love
and a little of your time.
Is this too much
to ask of you?
A life of pleasure
and a love so true?
You raise me up
on angel's wings.
From you I ask
Will I have these things?
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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You broke my heart in a wonderful poetic way! sigh.
Very nicely done!
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Thank you very much for the kind comment! The piece has done it's job well then. Thank you again for your read and comment
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emotion can be the greatest and worse thing youl ever experience in life, unfortunately its more sommonly the latter
good people do not deserve it
great poem shell
never stop beleving in yourself -
Im sure the person your asking, would only answer yes
As you are an amazing person and deserve these things in full 
This is another brilliant heartfelt write, you are so amazingly talented at conveying emotion in your poems. Each of your poems, though sometimes sad, are amazing reads and they all leave you thinking I WILL read that again and thanking yourself for reading it
Never stop producing this amazing stuff, it would be a shame
Rob
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