love making is a amazing art
it takes years of hard work and practice to get it right
but also your heart and soul must be in it
it must be so strong that the earth itself can hear you
without love it's a wasteful effort
your love must burn with passion and desire
love in the midst of it all
you also got to believe that your love can make it through all things
love must be gentle but strong
being able to support your strengths and weaknesses
it's also the only with passion in writing
A contest entry
- Love making ... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended November 26, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - come on i want to feel the passion by ruthie fallen angel.
700 points, ended December 16, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please tell me what you think and do you like it?
Comments
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good job and good luck
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It is very practical to make it know and yes it makes us perfect in years..I agree with you dear friend..well said ..and thanks ...
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Very nice poem. Good luck in the contest
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ure right hun very much right. its a very good write
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