I paw for your love
I paw for your kisses
I paw for your hugs
I wrestle with the pillow
I cannot sleep at night
I want to hold you in my arms
I want to feel you as you sleep
I wants can no longer be
Author notes
My name is Abe 1
Contest PIF less then 40 words
A contest entry
- 30-60 words Contest PIF Quickie..Picture Prompt ..58th Contest by Spiritualangel by spiritualangel.
660 points, ended December 3, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Beautiful. Well done. Best of Luck.
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wow. this is an awesome take on the prompt. i love this entire poem. it was so beautiful in the beginning, then the end just crashed! it's a perfect write. short, simple and just perfect
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a beautiful take on the promt very deep and powerfully sad at the end good luck inthe contest
marailsa
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Aww bless! Lovely write for the pic hun.
x
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What a great take on the picture. And this was such a sweet poem. Sad at the end. But you have penned this very well! Loved it. Good luck in the contest.
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Aw hun this is a sweetly written poem
with the touch of the Polar within it
and that sad ending
Hope things are fine with you
Best wishes and good luck
Julie
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