For all that I am,
paint me with –
melodic hues.
Your canvas,
is our bedroom.
Making love,
is our art.
Ageless strokes,
touch essential-
to restless yearnings.
Love beckons,
to be set free.
Sketched outlines,
picture portrayed.
My soul,
answers only-
to thee.
Author notes
Love making is an art...Unknown.
A contest entry
- Love making ... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended November 26, 2008, 19 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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The title drew me in, this is very lovely.
I especially enjoyed how you decided to end the poem, it leaves the reader wanting more..while still giving them a sense of conclusion.
Grand.
Bravo!
I see you did wonderfully in your contest, and I'm glad.
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Thanl you so much for commenting on my poem! Thank you ~Sie
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Beautiful! I love this... Well worthy of the gold.
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Thank you so much for commenting. ~Sie
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Yes..this is so specific and one to one relationship is there and is so true to themselves..the intimacy shown here is just eternal view.,.i love it..well done..
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With all due respect
This is only the invitation offered, what if the other said no, not now? It is a beautiful work, and I agree with your comment, perhaps I misunderstood the prompt. -
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The poem was written for the pic as well as the promt! Sorry you didn't get it. The act of love making is like fine art! Was how I precieved the prompt. ~Sie
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I suppose so, congratulations, it was a very well written piece.
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This strikes the soul with love, how you are bound to only one and can only answer to him. Beautifully writen
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how beautifully portrey'd is this the art of love making. I saw this challenge and hadn't decided on doing this one, you did it beautifully.
"Your canvas,
is our bedroom.
Making love,
is our art."
this poem is so vivid in romantic imagery,
"My soul,
answers only-
to thee."
Well done Poetress well done!
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Ahhhhhh how softly your words flow here. Lovely read.
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The art of love making, ah yeah!
It can be a portrait of true love and romance or it can be a bunch of filthy writing on the bathroom wall, whatever we put into it, makes it the more beautiful...
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Now I'm thinking of you as an artist. Have you been hiding that from me? I enjoyed this beauty. Good luck in the contest.
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